I tried hard to phrase Cass’ thought as sympathetic. Some of the first attempts sounded like glib Bond one-liners, which is not the kind of thing Cass would think here.
I shoved a lot of panels into this page so that future pages could have more breathing room as the action sequence goes on. The tighter compositions add to the fast pace of the scene, so it brought multiple benefits[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I had to rewrite this several times before I felt the flow of Cass’ logical thought progression was paced out in a comprehendible and believable way. Sometimes in stories, characters jump to conclusions before the audience is keen to the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Normally I keep Flint’s lisp away from characters’ names. Out-of-universe, I chose to do this because those would be the least familiar words to the average person reading this, therefore not as easy to decipher. In-universe, it’s because Flint takes[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This was actually two pages of script, but neither page had a lot of meat to it. Both scenes also end on the same note. So I combined them into one page to move things along.