Some panels were written out of page CCCXV because of how dense it was. These aren’t those exact panels, but this page fleshes out what those panels would have shown: Noah’s perspective of Cass’ escape scene and the sudden deterioration[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This part went through many script revisions. Lots of things happen in quick succession and it’s very chaotic, in contrast to all the scenes in the chapter up to this point. There’s several “spaces” in this scene with different characters[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
When I first tried laying out this page, it felt like things in this section of the chapter weren’t flowing as smoothly as they should. The emotional weight was being drowned out by the rapidly shifting events. At the very[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I would have liked to squeeze in a couple extra character beats with Ash and Morty, but I tossed them out of the script because there just wasn’t room on the page to do it. Plus, with the emergency, it[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Writing Cass’ bleat-filled dialogue was fun, but trying to fit the drawn-out speech into good-looking word balloons was not so much.