Thirteen’s scene was intended for later in the chapter. The scene that was originally going to happen on this page wasn’t working right; I wasn’t feeling it for reasons I couldn’t figure out. So I stopped trying to write around whatever the problem was and I tossed the script completely.

It actually feels better for Thirteen to have this revelation now rather than later on. It adds an extra bit of positivity as the story climbs down from the big action pages.