A few pages ago, I made a big deal about the obnoxious green color of Katsuko’s shirt. Yet, on this page, Katsuko’s new jacket is a similarly obnoxious color. Why? The color was only a part of the “problem.” The[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Archive for morty
Writing this page was an exercise in “less is more.” I originally had massive amounts of dialogue, mostly a back-and-forth argument between Noah and Morty that hit basically the same beats as the final page, but did so laboriously and[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
CCCXXXI: Smoldering Answers
There’s a deliberate contrast between the portrayal of the search for Cass’ and Noah’s cures in the previous chapter and this one, respectively. The exposition around Cass’ cure focuses on exactly how the nanobots work and the sequence of actions[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
CCCXXIX: Solace for a Salamander
The object that Zosa is adjusting is purposely obscured because I haven’t done enough research to know exactly what she would be doing here to monitor Noah for changes. I’m already treading on thin ice with the science in this[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
CCCXXVIII: Burning Questions
The notebook text in panel 4 reads: 11/2 – I sequenced a new reversal* the mods from the first try* *mpurities from versions 2 a* *ly take a day to mature* 11/4-*serum yesterday. No change* ( * text is cut[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…