I considered several possible “severity levels” that the A- and B-story climaxes could reach. In the end, I decided to tone them both down to be resolved quickly, but in an imperfect way that left everyone involved with mixed feelings.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Originally, Cass was going to explain to Morty on page CCLXXIV that the reason Ash and Demetrius chose the Allium is because Ash’s uncle runs the place and it would be “friendly territory,” but there was already a lot of[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Argo’s device is fashioned from the one Noah made for Flint. It was last seen on page CLXXXVII.
My education in writing fiction is based in scripts for movies and TV, where it’s rare to hear someone’s thoughts. And when we do, it can come across as cheesy. That’s why I avoid thought bubbles unless I absolutely can’t[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The exact trajectory Cass and Noah’s date was pretty much set from the moment I started writing this chapter, but the Flint-Mike B-plot was mostly improvised. This page was plotted to be a perfunctory scene establishing why Flint is going[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…