A few pages ago, I made a big deal about the obnoxious green color of Katsuko’s shirt. Yet, on this page, Katsuko’s new jacket is a similarly obnoxious color. Why? The color was only a part of the “problem.” The[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
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CCLI: A New Start
on July 5, 2019
at 4:00 am
Chapter: 11: Class Warfare Part II
Location: Attic High, Simon T. Attic Hall
Production Code: UTC251
I like it when transformation stories key into what is going through a character’s mind after they’ve changed. The stories I’ve been writing haven’t called for much of that, and it’s something I would like to do more with in[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
CCXXXVI: Deetle-Doooo
on August 8, 2018
at 1:00 pm
Chapter: 11: Class Warfare Part II
Location: Attic High, Simon T. Attic Hall
Production Code: UTC236
Believe it or not, the first drafts of this story dropped Keris and Jen into a plot hole until the end of the story to focus completely on the fight. We weren’t going to see them throughout this entire climax.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
CCXV: Descent
on June 1, 2015
at 3:00 am
Chapter: 10: Class Warfare
Characters: Ashton, Chuck, Demetrius, Dr. Mitchell, Dr. Vine, Flint, Jen, July, Katsuko, Ken, Keris, Kestrel, Leon, Marlene, Ms. Harvick, Secretary, Sinbad, Student 30, Student 31, Student 34, Thirteen
Location: Attic High, Simon T. Attic Hall
Production Code: UTC215
The page title comes from the name of the sixth-season cliffhanger of Star Trek: The Next Generation. An earlier page was titled “Redemption,” which wasn’t an intentional Trek reference, but after a bit I realized the coincidence that “Redemption” is[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
CLXXII: Keris Unleashed
on June 9, 2014
at 4:00 am
Production Code: UTC172
This is the last page of “New Tricks.” Big thank you to my friend Jeff for writing this great story!