XIX: The Brief Re-Establishment of the Documentary Sub-Sub-Plot
Sinbad’s cameo was included at the last minute so that he wouldn’t drop out of the story entirely. Morty’s line in panel 3 is a reference to a George Carlin stand-up.
Sinbad’s cameo was included at the last minute so that he wouldn’t drop out of the story entirely. Morty’s line in panel 3 is a reference to a George Carlin stand-up.
There are a few things I’m happy about in the final panel, and a lot of things I’m not at all happy with. The proportions are especially terrible. The overall panel does pretty much encapsulate how I imagined the series[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
It’s not explained how Keris’ dress managed to stay mostly intact despite her mammoth size. At the time I was concerned about allowing “furry nudity”, the use of fur to cover up body parts on an animal character that are[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The spatial relationships between characters isn’t very clear here. Keris is still standing on her table, but Morty has hopped back to the ground.
Ash and Flint were originally going to be present for Keris’ demonstration. The way the story panned out just didn’t allow for them to be there. Unfortunately this forced me to cut a remark Ash makes about the Beautificationizer which[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…