XIX: The Brief Re-Establishment of the Documentary Sub-Sub-Plot
Sinbad’s cameo was included at the last minute so that he wouldn’t drop out of the story entirely. Morty’s line in panel 3 is a reference to a George Carlin stand-up.
Sinbad’s cameo was included at the last minute so that he wouldn’t drop out of the story entirely. Morty’s line in panel 3 is a reference to a George Carlin stand-up.
There are a few things I’m happy about in the final panel, and a lot of things I’m not at all happy with. The proportions are especially terrible. The overall panel does pretty much encapsulate how I imagined the series[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
To make the punchline work, I ended the strip with a double-sized panel that showed off Demetrius’ entire booth. Breaking the panel boundaries in this way further pushed me toward adopting a full-page format.
This is Demetrius’ debut. It seemed better for Flint to meet him alone so the audience could share Flint’s confusion. This strip was meant to come before the previous strip. The plan was to flip-flop every other strip between Flint’s[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…