This is the end of Chapter 14. Chapter 15 will start early next year. An exact date is TBA, but expect it no sooner than February. Before diving into another long haul, I need to take a break. (Too bad[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This part went through many script revisions. Lots of things happen in quick succession and it’s very chaotic, in contrast to all the scenes in the chapter up to this point. There’s several “spaces” in this scene with different characters[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
When I first tried laying out this page, it felt like things in this section of the chapter weren’t flowing as smoothly as they should. The emotional weight was being drowned out by the rapidly shifting events. At the very[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Writing Cass’ bleat-filled dialogue was fun, but trying to fit the drawn-out speech into good-looking word balloons was not so much.
I said in a previous commentary that the point of this mouse side-plot was to add some action to the chapter. That was actually just half of the reason. I also really wanted to give Cass a clear “win.” It[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…