This picks up from page CCCXVI. Also, just like page CCCXVII, here we see a chapter opening with a scene where someone chases after Cass and suddenly falls and loses consciousness. Those parallels were mostly unintentional. Noah losing consciousness was[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I think I’m getting better at drawing trees. Realistically, the weather would reduce the long-distance visibility to hide much of what’s shown in the final panel. I took artistic liberty there to show how vast the undeveloped land beyond the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This part went through many script revisions. Lots of things happen in quick succession and it’s very chaotic, in contrast to all the scenes in the chapter up to this point. There’s several “spaces” in this scene with different characters[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I would have liked to squeeze in a couple extra character beats with Ash and Morty, but I tossed them out of the script because there just wasn’t room on the page to do it. Plus, with the emergency, it[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Writing Cass’ bleat-filled dialogue was fun, but trying to fit the drawn-out speech into good-looking word balloons was not so much.