This was the first scene I wrote for the chapter. At the time I expected this would be the first time readers would see what Mr. and Mrs. Calloway looked like, but then I was worried that the revelation would[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Flint’s pose in panel 2 is one of my favorites. Everything just clicked for that one. While ballooning the page, I put a fourth point on the “ReinWHATment?!” balloon pointing to Demetrius. It took a minute to realize the mistake.
I regret coloring Jen’s entire suit brown. It’s not a flattering color, and especially unappealing on this page, with the abundance of reds and browns on the other characters. The page title is a reference to the computer game Civilization.[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Look how blank that cork board is. I neglected to draw anything on it in previous pages, when it wasn’t so obvious. Now it just sort of stands right out to me. Man, this is one boring classroom. Then again,[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I wanted a bit of dialogue explaining that Cass and her friends worked out a system where, if one of them was caught in an urgent transformation crisis, they would alert the others for a quick assist. It was part[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…