Including Cass and Noah was almost an afterthought. Rather than draw more panels of Jen talking, I decided the final page of Phase One should feature Cass somehow. Noah’s offer to go with her to the store adds a touch[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
When writing Sinbad for this scene, I had to remember this was the same character who didn’t seem bothered that his daughter was changed into a poodle monster at the fundraiser. I had to make him appear concerned, yet also[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Cass and Noah’s first kiss was planned to come some time in Phase Two, but I felt the readers should see more progress on the relationship after it took so long for Chapter 4 to finish. It also follows the[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Cass’ words in panel 5 are the only dialogue that remained in the second half of the script through most of this chapter’s rewrites. Jen was originally the one who asked her how she was feeling, and it was actually[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Cass originally gave Morty a speech before accepting his apology, to express the recurring theme of responsibility and how it applies to his character arc. I knew something wasn’t right when I rewrote the speech ten times and it still[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…