Posted by Jim on August 8, 2018
Chapter: 11: Class Warfare Part II
Location: Attic High, Simon T. Attic Hall
Production Code: UTC236
Believe it or not, the first drafts of this story dropped Keris and Jen into a plot hole until the end of the story to focus completely on the fight. We weren’t going to see them throughout this entire climax. Eventually I realized that absolutely shouldn’t happen, and when devising the substance of this scene, I realized it was a golden opportunity to give her something to do that only she could do to assist the outcome of the fight.
I think I drew Jen too large here. I couldn’t see the proportions clearly through all the CUTENESS.